Thank you for a visit in your urban design jungle! First of all, I like the effort you have put in making your blog look different than the rest. I actually googled "SCABUHU" (I thought it was some kind of animal) before I read the bottom of the blog and got the explanation.
About your posters: They are all nicely done; you don't try to put too many elements in each poster. However, I miss some info about the receiver and the sender - this way I could give more indepth comments on what you are trying to communicate.
There is no description of which aspect the posters focus on (which is done deliberatly, I presume) so I'll make an educated guess:
Poster 1: Poster one; the blue background with a fist is about colour. The fist symbolizes the work that is done, "destroying" the railway zone as it is today. By having everything in one colour (except from the black fist that also stays in the background), the yellow text gets more attention. If the text and not the fist should get the most attention; well done.
Poster 2: Barbie-makeover. Clearly about 3D. I'm curious about the receiver for this one!!
Poster 3: This poster is about structure, i guess. My favourite. Less is more. Nice effect with the bike between the two o's.
Poster 4: Black and white. I guess this is about storytelling? This is the story about two girls that are trying to connect but have their difficulties (I sense some anger). So, it is about the spoorzone being the connection point for the future, but getting there is going to be a difficult way. Nice. However, I miss some theory from the book; the viewer is not really guided from one part of the poster (beginning) to the end.
Hope this was useful to you! Ow, and you might consider putting some information about the project itself here and the process you go through. Would be nice to read about!
Hi SCABUHU!
ReplyDeleteThank you for a visit in your urban design jungle! First of all, I like the effort you have put in making your blog look different than the rest. I actually googled "SCABUHU" (I thought it was some kind of animal) before I read the bottom of the blog and got the explanation.
About your posters: They are all nicely done; you don't try to put too many elements in each poster. However, I miss some info about the receiver and the sender - this way I could give more indepth comments on what you are trying to communicate.
There is no description of which aspect the posters focus on (which is done deliberatly, I presume) so I'll make an educated guess:
Poster 1: Poster one; the blue background with a fist is about colour. The fist symbolizes the work that is done, "destroying" the railway zone as it is today. By having everything in one colour (except from the black fist that also stays in the background), the yellow text gets more attention. If the text and not the fist should get the most attention; well done.
Poster 2: Barbie-makeover. Clearly about 3D. I'm curious about the receiver for this one!!
Poster 3: This poster is about structure, i guess. My favourite. Less is more. Nice effect with the bike between the two o's.
Poster 4: Black and white. I guess this is about storytelling? This is the story about two girls that are trying to connect but have their difficulties (I sense some anger). So, it is about the spoorzone being the connection point for the future, but getting there is going to be a difficult way. Nice. However, I miss some theory from the book; the viewer is not really guided from one part of the poster (beginning) to the end.
Hope this was useful to you! Ow, and you might consider putting some information about the project itself here and the process you go through. Would be nice to read about!
On behalf of team 3 (spoorzone.wordpress)
Kine